The Name: Would've been better if it involved more family members. Watch "like" in speech. Parts were great, but overall, it lacked cohesion. Goals were solid.
Flying Phoenixes: Your intros seemed to trail off a bit. Watch how often you guys say "like" when presenting. Loved the power point and shield. Really loved the idea of learning from mistakes!
Pandamonium: Cool name, and I loved your explanation of your cheer, one of the best justified of the co-hort. Overall, though I felt that parts lacked enthusiasm and originality.
Donut Pals: After getting the extra time, I wanted to have my socks blown off. Yet, it still felt scattered. The cheer and your colorful visuals were high points.
Purring Pandas: Two panda themed families? What are the chances? Very original presentation with a lot of spunk, but so much was made of the dance. I thought it was a low light, not because it wasn't funny, but because it didn't seem to fit the theme of the presentation. Always hard to go first.
ErlJ: T-shirts were a very cute idea. I loved them, but I wouldn't have based my entire visual on them. They didn't help keep you organized. Would've been better as a complement to visuals, not the whole thing.
Extraordinaires: Cheer was awesome. Best in the cohort. The visuals were a little bit lacking, but overall feeling was high on originality.
Omee's Crew: Very cute! Loved the money. Very creative introductions. Also, there was a dynamic among the family members that seemed to communicate cohesion. I liked that best. Creedo could've been better.
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